Oh, that was beautiful. Especially that first paragraph. It's such a perfect description of her relationship with her parents.
It would be the last straw, if Maeby wasn't sure the last straw had come along years ago and she just hadn't noticed, had just kept going on. And this. This too. I love this description of how fed up she is with her parents.
I love how you made something as ridiculous as AD into a gorgeous fic. I love you to death. Thanks for writing this.
Just one thing. I think it's a frozen banana stand, not a hot dog stand. Just a small canon thing.
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Date: 2005-03-15 04:44 pm (UTC)It would be the last straw, if Maeby wasn't sure the last straw had come along years ago and she just hadn't noticed, had just kept going on.
And this. This too. I love this description of how fed up she is with her parents.
I love how you made something as ridiculous as AD into a gorgeous fic. I love you to death. Thanks for writing this.
Just one thing. I think it's a frozen banana stand, not a hot dog stand. Just a small canon thing.