I really enjoyed this story. Maeby being composed of halves was a very interesting observation, but one that fits so well with her character and what she has been brought up in.
I thought it was really moving. Loved the halfway-kiss and how it brought her to her first "all-the-way" moment - a smile.
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dancing_serpent
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Date: 2005-04-30 04:30 am (UTC)I thought it was really moving. Loved the halfway-kiss and how it brought her to her first "all-the-way" moment - a smile.
Thanks so much for writing this!