There are things about cheese that Jess has to know.
You completely had me with the first section. It's Jess...being himself. Smoking. Caught, stuck, temporally and circumstantially, wanting to be somewhere else but not having a clue where; I love the moment when the unidentidied drip lands on him, because it's absolutely not something you'd ever see on Gilmore Girls, where there are no unexplained messes and people don't go around in their daily lives with this constant knawing dissatisfaction. His tamped down frustration and desire for Rory is just perfect.
"Jess," she says slowly, and she takes his hand, which is such a Rory-is-saying-something-important thing for her to do that he wants to scream.
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Date: 2005-09-15 08:49 am (UTC)You completely had me with the first section. It's Jess...being himself. Smoking. Caught, stuck, temporally and circumstantially, wanting to be somewhere else but not having a clue where; I love the moment when the unidentidied drip lands on him, because it's absolutely not something you'd ever see on Gilmore Girls, where there are no unexplained messes and people don't go around in their daily lives with this constant knawing dissatisfaction. His tamped down frustration and desire for Rory is just perfect.
"Jess," she says slowly, and she takes his hand, which is such a Rory-is-saying-something-important thing for her to do that he wants to scream.
So very good.