Fitter Happer commentary

[zarahemla]

For mosca and anyone else who liked it, I present:

Fitter Happier More Productive: Now with commentary!. I hope it makes sense.

Boy, that takes it out of you. I need some chocolate. :)

Comments

[typicrobots.livejournal.com]

I know the feeling. And yes, chocolate will heal everything.

I loved your commentary. I agreed with a lot of stuff you said about Connor and Angel and why you don't like them. And my fave was section 3 too. Dark.

I also think "Stiletto Vezzini" and "moll" are damn funny.
Lol. So do I.

[mosca.livejournal.com]

Was fascinating. I think I have a better handle on that story now, which is why I asked for it-- I felt like I didn't really understand it before.

Also, you and I write in very different ways, and it was neat to be able to pick that up.